The Inheritance

The Land Eleanor Chose to Keep · Chapter 1 of 6

Chapter 1

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The first thing Eleanor Witham saw when Jack Ror burned the contract was her own name disappearing in the flames.

For twenty-three years, that name had belonged to other people.

To her father when he wanted obedience.

To her sister when she wanted something to mock.

To church women when they lowered their voices and said, Poor Silas. What will he ever do with a daughter like that?

Now Eleanor stood inside a wilderness trading post beyond Bitter Pass, snow melting from the hem of her blue wool dress, and watched the only paper explaining why she had been sent there curl into black ash.

She rushed toward the stove.

“That was the agreement!”

Jack shut the iron door before she could reach inside.

“No,” he said. “That was your father’s agreement.”

His voice was deep but strangely calm.

That unsettled Eleanor more than anger would have.

She had prepared herself for anger.

She had prepared herself for disappointment.

She had prepared herself for the expression men wore when their eyes traveled over her body and decided she had failed some test she had never agreed to take.

Jack Ror gave her none of those things.

He was enormous, well over six feet, wrapped in worn buckskin and heavy pelts. His dark beard nearly hid the scar running from his right brow toward his jaw. His hair brushed his collar, wind-tangled and streaked with melting snow.

But it was his eyes Eleanor noticed.

Slate gray.

Watchful.

Not gentle exactly.

A man living beyond Bitter Pass probably couldn't afford gentleness.

Still, when he looked at her, he looked at her face.

“You paid for me,” Eleanor whispered.

“I paid to get you away from him.”

The words landed harder than an insult.

Behind them, several trappers pretending not to listen became very interested in their cups.

Eleanor’s cheeks burned.

She hated being watched.

She hated being discussed.

Most of all, she hated not understanding.

Jack crossed to the rough table near the wall.

Two bowls of stew waited there.

Two cups.

Two spoons.

A small loaf of bread sat between them.

He pulled out the second chair.

“For me?” Eleanor asked.

“For whoever came through that door.”

Her throat tightened.

“No one has ever set a place for me before they knew whether I’d earned it.”

Something changed in Jack’s expression.

It was gone too fast for her to name.

“That’s their failing.”

He nodded toward the chair.

“Sit.”

Eleanor obeyed almost cautiously.

The chair did not creak.

No one laughed.

No one suggested the furniture might surrender under her.

Jack tore the loaf in half and pushed the larger piece toward her.

Eleanor stared at it.

Her father had watched every bite she took.

Cordelia could eat sugared biscuits at midnight and still criticize Eleanor for buttering a roll.

At the Witham house, hunger had become something Eleanor experienced with shame.

Jack took one bite of stew.

“Eat before it gets cold.”

She did.

Beef.

Potatoes.

Onions.

Rosemary.

Simple food.

Hot food.

It nearly made her cry.

Jack noticed.

He did Eleanor the kindness of pretending he didn’t.

For several minutes, the only sounds were the storm and spoons scraping bowls.

Finally Eleanor asked the question she could no longer hold.

“Why would you give my father land and two horses just to get me away from him?”

Jack stopped eating.

“Because your father thinks that strip of mountain is worthless.”

“It isn’t?”

“No.”

The warmth left her fingers.

“What is it?”

Jack leaned forward.

“Something buried beneath Bitter Pass.”

Eleanor looked at him.

“And my name is the only reason he can’t take it back?”

“Yes.”

“What does that mean?”

Jack glanced toward the men at the counter.

Then he stood.

“We leave.”

“Now?”

“Storm’s getting worse.”

“That sounds like an argument for staying.”

“It’ll be worse by morning.”

He pulled on leather gloves.

Eleanor remained seated.

“You can’t tell me my father sent me into the mountains because of something buried under them and then expect me to calmly climb onto a mule.”

Jack looked at her.

“You won’t be on a mule.”

“Oh?”

“I brought a wagon.”

That should not have made her feel better.

Somehow it did.

He lowered his voice.

“I’ll explain at the cabin.”

“Why not here?”

“Because three men in this room have sold information to Fallon Creek.”

Eleanor’s spine stiffened.

Jack looked toward the bar without moving his head.

“And one of them has been staring at the paper you carried since you entered.”

Her gaze flicked toward a narrow-faced man in a fox-fur cap.

He immediately looked down.

Jack gathered Eleanor’s carpetbag.

She reached for it.

“I can carry my own things.”

“I know.”

“Then why are you carrying it?”

“Because I’m already standing.”

Eleanor blinked.

Then, despite everything, a laugh almost escaped her.

Jack noticed that too.

This time he did not pretend otherwise.

The corner of his mouth moved.

Barely.

But it moved.

They stepped into the storm.

The cold struck Eleanor like an open hand.

Jack’s wagon stood beneath a pine lean-to, pulled by two massive bay horses. He helped Eleanor up without making a spectacle of it, then tucked a thick buffalo robe around her knees.

He climbed beside her.

Behind them, the trading-post door opened.

The narrow-faced man stepped onto the porch.

Jack’s hand disappeared beneath his coat.

The man stopped.

Jack said nothing.

Neither did the stranger.

The door slowly closed again.

Then the wagon rolled into the white dark.

For two hours, Eleanor saw little except snow, trees and the broad shape of the man beside her.

Jack drove like someone who knew every turn without needing to see it.

“You’ve lived here long?” she asked.

“Fifteen years.”

“Alone?”

“Yes.”

“Why?”

He glanced at her.

“You ask a lot of questions.”

“I was raised in a house where nobody answered any. It leaves a person curious.”

Another nearly-smile.

“Fair enough.”

He looked back toward the trail.

“My parents died when I was young. Had a brother. Matthew.”

“Had?”

Jack’s jaw tightened.

“He died eight winters ago.”

“I’m sorry.”

Jack nodded once.

Eleanor understood the signal.

That wound was not for strangers.

She changed the subject.

“What exactly did my father owe you?”

“He didn’t.”

“Then why was there a debt agreement?”

“That was the story he told you.”

She stared at him.

Jack continued.

“Your father owed the Fallon Creek Bank forty thousand dollars. He still does.”

Eleanor’s breath caught.

She had known the ranch was struggling.

She had not known the amount.

“That much?”

“Yes.”

“How do you know?”

“Because your father has been looking for money everywhere. Including where he shouldn’t.”

The wagon hit a rut.

Jack steadied Eleanor with one arm before immediately removing it.

No lingering touch.

No assumption.

She noticed.

He continued.

“Last spring, a surveyor found indications of a silver deposit near Bitter Pass.”

Eleanor’s heart beat faster.

“How large?”

“Nobody knows.”

“But enough to matter.”

“Yes.”

“And the worthless land?”

“Isn’t worthless.”

She felt suddenly sick.

“My father traded it to you.”

“He thought he did.”

“What does that mean?”

Jack’s gaze remained on the trail.

“Your mother inherited that parcel from her father.”

Eleanor stopped breathing.

“My mother?”

“Margaret Bell Witham.”

Hearing her mother’s full name from his mouth felt almost intimate.

Eleanor had been eleven when Margaret died from fever.

She remembered warmth.

Lavender soap.

Soft singing.

And a woman who had never once told Eleanor she was too large.

“How did you know her name?”

“My brother surveyed land for your grandfather before he died.”

Eleanor turned fully toward him.

Jack’s face became harder.

“Matthew kept records.”

“What records?”

“Deeds. Survey notes. Boundary maps.”

Eleanor gripped the edge of the wagon seat.

“And?”

“When your mother died, that land passed to her children.”

“Cordelia and me.”

“No.”

Jack looked at her.

“Just you.”

The mountains seemed to go silent.

“That makes no sense.”

“Your grandfather’s deed named Margaret’s eldest surviving daughter.”

Eleanor stared.

“Me.”

“Yes.”

“My father never told me.”

“I doubt he planned to.”

A cold anger began inside her.

Not hot.

Not wild.

Worse.

Precise.

“He used my land in the agreement.”

Jack nodded.

“He acted as though he owned it. But legally, he could only transfer it with your consent.”

“I signed.”

“You signed because he told you you were settling a debt.”

“Yes.”

“That makes the transfer questionable.”

“Then you don’t own it.”

“No.”

“Who does?”

“You.”

The word felt impossible.

Eleanor Witham owned something?

Something her father could not take?

She shook her head.

“But you said my name keeps him from taking it back.”

“Because now there is a witnessed record that Silas acknowledged the parcel existed and belonged in a settlement connected directly to you.”

Jack’s eyes narrowed against the blowing snow.

“He exposed what he’d spent years hiding.”

Eleanor’s hands trembled.

“What is under that mountain?”

“Silver, most likely.”

“How much?”

“I don’t know.”

“And if my father learns?”

Jack looked toward the dark trail behind them.

“He will come.”

The cabin appeared an hour later.

Except it was not a cabin.

Eleanor had imagined a one-room shack covered in pelts and smoke.

Instead, Jack Ror lived in a broad timber house built against the slope of Bitter Pass. Stone chimneys rose on both ends. A barn stood behind it. A covered porch wrapped around the front.

Light glowed from two windows.

“You built this?”

“With Matthew.”

Jack’s voice changed on his brother’s name.

He helped her down.

Inside, the house surprised her again.

It was clean.

Simple.

Warm.

Shelves lined one wall.

And on those shelves were books.

Dozens of them.

Eleanor forgot the cold.

“You read?”

Jack removed his coat.

“Sometimes.”

She crossed the room as though pulled by a rope.

Shakespeare.

Longfellow.

Cooper.

A Bible.

A battered atlas.

She touched the spine of The Last of the Mohicans.

“My father said men who worked with their hands didn’t waste time on books.”

“Your father says a great many foolish things.”

Eleanor turned.

Jack was watching her.

For the first time that day, she smiled without hiding it.

Jack looked almost startled.

Then he pointed toward a hallway.

“Second room is yours.”

“My room?”

“Yes.”

She hesitated.

“We aren’t…”

“No.”

He understood immediately.

Color rose in her cheeks.

Jack spoke gently.

“You’re not obligated to share anything with me. Not a room. Not a bed. Not your life.”

“But the agreement said wife.”

“The agreement is ash.”

She swallowed.

“Then what am I doing here?”

“Whatever you decide.”

Nobody had ever said those words to Eleanor before.

Whatever you decide.

Jack turned away before she could answer.

Later, after she had washed and changed into a dry dress, she found him at the table unfolding a large map.

He motioned her over.

A red line marked the Witham property.

Far north of Fallon Creek, a narrow wedge climbed into Bitter Pass.

Jack tapped it.

“Here.”

Eleanor leaned closer.

“That belongs to me?”

“It did before your father tried to use it.”

“You said it still does.”

Jack nodded.

Another marking caught her attention.

A black X.

“What’s that?”

Jack did not answer immediately.

“Matthew’s last survey point.”

“Your brother?”

“Yes.”

“He found the silver?”

“He found something.”

Eleanor looked at the faded writing.

Then she noticed a second note in the margin.

A date.

Eight years earlier.

Three days before Matthew Ror died.

Her stomach tightened.

“How did your brother die?”

Jack stared at the map.

“He fell from a ridge.”

Something in his tone made Eleanor study him.

“You don’t believe that.”

Jack’s silence answered.

Outside, a horse whinnied sharply.

Jack’s head snapped up.

He crossed to the window.

Eleanor followed.

Moonlight reflected off the snow.

Nothing moved.

Then Jack opened the door.

A horse stood near the fence.

Not one of his.

Its saddle was empty.

A leather pouch hung from the horn.

Jack drew his revolver.

He approached slowly, removed the pouch and returned.

Inside was a folded piece of paper.

He opened it.

His expression changed.

“What?” Eleanor asked.

Jack handed her the note.

Three words had been written in black ink.

SEND HER BACK.

Below them was a symbol Eleanor recognized immediately.

A small W inside a circle.

The brand of Witham Ranch.

Eleanor raised her eyes.

“My father knows.”

Jack looked toward the darkness beyond the cabin.

“No.”

His voice became cold.

“Your father knew before you ever left Fallon Creek.”

And somewhere beyond the trees, a branch snapped.

Jack extinguished the lamp.

“Stay behind me.”

Eleanor’s heart hammered as his revolver came up.

For the first time, she understood that Silas Witham had not sent her into the mountains merely because he wanted to be rid of an unwanted daughter.

He had sent her because she owned something.

And now somebody was willing to kill to get it back.

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